128. Poetry: Series: Harlem On My Mind: 3. Hail Mary
Shephard Hall, The City College of New York
This is the third poem in my series, Harlem on My Mind. Harlem is a black community in the upper middle section of Manhattan.
Series: Harlem on My Mind
I graduated from High School a term early; I was in a rush to start college and get my life going. I attended graduation ceremonies on a cold January night and the next day began my life as a college student at The City College of New York, in Harlem. I was 17 years old, idealistic, naïve, and impressionable. After my first term, I decided to take summer courses in my haste to accelerate my life. That’s where I met Mary. I hope she is well and happy. She will always be my darling friend, young and beautiful. And full of guts.
3.
Hail Mary 1966
Mary Adams was the Cleopatra of
advanced French that summer.
Her skin blackened by the Nile sun
in a previous life when she was queen.
I once leaned against her arm over
Molière, while searching for my pen:
her skin was like
the fallen petals of a rose.
She was 21, and a mother, with no husband,
this onyx jewel with
slow, smooth, speech
that played the background jazz
as we spoke and walked along Convent Avenue.
She was going to leave the Motthaven projects
in the South Bronx,
be a teacher,
was going to make it.
It was the year
“Who’s Afraid of Virginia Wolf?”
scandalized the screen,
and you had to be of age or
accompanied by an adult to gain admission.
I was seventeen.
She said, in her best, torch song, sibilant-enhanced
melody:
“Don’t worry, Susie. We’ll just tell them
I’m your mother.”
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Wow! I just read all 3 of these…you make your memories play like a movie in my mind. I can see, hear, and smell the past you describe! Awesome poetically induced imagery–Thank you!
Tuesday January 8, 2008 – 10:26am (PST) Remove Comment
- Bill
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‘sibilant-enhanced’ – I love that phrase especially when one can positively drool over each
Tuesday January 8, 2008 – 08:55pm (GMT) Remove Comment
AWWWW!!! I love the last line :o). Seriously, can you image the stir it would have caused back then? And she was willing to do that for you? That’s amazing! And it tells of true friendship. Thanks again for sharing a bit of your past with us. It’s fantastic :oD.
Tuesday January 8, 2008 – 05:05pm (CST) Remove Comment
and yet another brilliant poem for the pen of sans souci. i can see and hear this woman and, more imporatntly, feel what you felt for her.
Wednesday January 9, 2008 – 01:10pm (EST) Remove Comment
- Steve P
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Wonderful poem. I hope Mary is not only well and happy, but that she also finds your poem and reconnects with you. Thank you for sharing.
Tuesday January 8, 2008 – 11:00pm (PST) Remove Comment
- Nicho…
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Virginia Woolf watch out! Who’s afraid of Mary and Susie? A touching poem of what friendship is all about, recounted in wonderfully vivid images… Thank you for sharing.
Wednesday January 9, 2008 – 10:34pm (EST) Remove Comment
- Susan…
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Fabulous……
- Frani
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Great description and I loved the ending, it caught me by surprise!
Amazing poem…………..your words always transport me to another place and time!
Thursday January 10, 2008 – 07:01pm (EST) Remove Comment
starfishred wrote on Jan 8, ’08
wonderful
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poetessgarden wrote on Jan 8, ’08
oh the last line really got me…beautiful story within a poem…
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lauritasita wrote on Jan 8, ’08
Wow. I wish I had a friend that age growing up. When I think of all the movies I could’ve seen !!!
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strongwilledwoman wrote on Jan 8, ’08
What a beautiful tribute to your friend. Ah I remember, “Who’s Afraid of Virgina Wolf.” I am sure a lot of young folks look at this movie today and say, “What’s the big deal about that movie, and why that rating.”
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redheadgirl4 wrote on Jan 8, ’08
This is lovely, vivid and descriptive as always. I wonder, did she make it? I hope so. Hugs!
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sanssouciblogs wrote on Jan 8, ’08
I will never forget the image I had after Mary made that statement–could you just see us?
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sweetpotatoqueen wrote on Jan 8, ’08
She said, in her best, torch song, sibilant-enhanced
melody: “Don’t worry, Susie. We’ll just tell them I’m your mother.” I CAN just hear her saying this although we never met…wonderful imagery with words! I do so enjoy your tales of life that you share.,really do! |
nikinoelle wrote on Jan 9, ’08
Another wonderful poem from your “Harlem on My Mind Series”…great work!
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sanssouciblogs said
Mary Adams was the Cleopatra of advanced French that summer. Her skin blackened by the Nile sun in a previous life when she was queen. I love your description. I could see her, Mary. My first year in college I met people that will stay with me all my life too. Funny how that last line can invoke humor to some and scandal to others. And trust me, I have met those who it invokes scandal.
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