99. Poetry: The Lake
Ainsi, toujours poussés vers de nouveaux rivages, Dans la nuit eternelle emporté sans retour…
~from Le Lac, by Lamartine
photograph: Roger Williams Park, Providence Rhode Island
11/23/07
The inspiration: Oakland Lake on April 3, 2002
The Lake
©srk 4/02
The day before this day of bright sun,
the water was the broken glass of a Perrier bottle;
a sullen, yet rich green, refractive along the edges,
heavy from the co-mingling of clouds above.
Now it leans to blue then gray like the eyes of a
flirtatious fickle female.
On the promenade, a goose approaches,
his broad breast streaked with algae.
At first glance he is made of cracked porcelain
until he plods off to his mate
and honks in her face.
Toward the first bend there is the lull of rushing water
over the storm drain. The grates catch strings of green.
Two Asian parents loudly encourage their two tiny children
to reach into a plastic bag and retrieve bread crumbs; these are
ritually scattered into the lake like ashes. White ducks glide to them.
On the branch of a bush, acting like the bridge of a nose,
there sit a pair of eyeglasses, like a disembodied limb;
startling . Removed from the contextual normality
they become a joke, yet I dare them to grab hold of the sun
with their thick lenses, focus on dry leaves, and set them aflame.
Instead, they play and mock with blinding reflective light.
Children become a photograph etched into the
backdrop of small, shiny, bright yellow, flowers, in cool green.
Now the lake belongs to Monet.
A woman in her jogging suit bends to brush her ungainly, brown dog.
At about this time, the heart is pumping,
hair is weighing heavily on the neck but pain
flees consciousness.
At the final round, near the snapping turtles on the rock,
baking like cakes in the sun,
the trucks on Northern Boulevard no longer exist.
There are only song birds, and geese,
the conversations between water and sky,
the rhythm of feet, and breath, and sweat,
and the vision of the lake, forever moving, forever the same.
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As always I am in awe of your talent. YOu paint such a beautiful picture. I am envious of your talent
Lovely poetry and image it touched me…
Gosh I could almost be there.
bon jour, lelac, such pretty wordsmerci ,bonnuit moiefriend,amie
You are so talented! Beautiful…….
wonderful picture; both words and photo 🙂 Thank you
Beautiful poem, but so sad… It somehow melds with the Karyotakis poem I posted (or perhaps I’m influenced by his tragic end). Thank you for sharing and for hosting!
“Now it leans to blue then gray like the eyes of a flirtatious fickle female.” My favorite line *whew*. This is beautiful and full of so many different emotions. You can feel gladness because Spring has arrived. You feel romance because of the goose honking at his mate.Joy to see the children playing. Loneliness because of the forlorn glasses. Excitement to see children free in the warmth of the changing weather. Just beautiful!
the trucks on Northern Boulevard no longer exist. There are only song birds, and geese, Only a townie could have written this, understood the stark contrast. Well done Sue you have got to those special places
greenwytch wrote on Nov 27, ’07
an absolutely enchanting poem. thank you.
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lauritasita wrote on Nov 27, ’07
Very peaceful. Is this the lake in the park near where you live ? I can almost see it when I read this.
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redheadgirl4 wrote on Nov 27, ’07
You have such an interesting way of painting with words. When I read your posts, I can see the sites, hear the sounds, smell the smells. That is a real gift, and I loved this poem and the image it evokes. Hugs!!!!
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sanssouciblogs wrote on Nov 27, ’07
Thank you so much for these wonderful comments. In retrospect perhaps I should set the tone for the poem: I was on a teaching sabbatical and studying writing, digital art and several other classes including stress reduction. It was the spring term and the prof decided we’d go out to the nearby lake (which is actually near my house) and walk. We were walking with a buddy and if I recall, we were not allowed to talk, we were supposed to meditate. So I was hyperaware of my senses and taking mental notes to put it all down on paper. Someone must have dropped their eyeglasses and they were placed by the finder on the branch of a bush which I found humorous. I dug into my anthology and pulled this poem out without even reading it. I think my mind was still enjoying the fall scene when we were away this past weekend, and the photo just melded iwth the poem, though it wasn’t the same season.
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sweetpotatoqueen wrote on Nov 28, ’07
Your words give readers eyes for the sights that you describe…..fabulous mingling of descriptions. As always…enjoyed my visit with you!
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philsgal7759 wrote on Nov 28, ’07
Full of amazing images. well done
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Ahhh…. beautiful, I loved it. I felt I was there, and as you might imagine, this was the part I liked best:
“Children become a photograph etched into the backdrop of small, shiny, bright yellow, flowers, in cool green. Now the lake belongs to Monet”. Keep on writing! 🙂 |
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