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372. Something to share: the editor’s critique of submitted manuscript

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I wanted to tell my friends who have been following me: My manuscript submission was reviewed by an editor, just a once over, and I was sent a critique. Suggestions were made that I can use or not. I will probably take heed. Most are about organization, and a few mechanical tweaks. But the main thing is the manuscript was favorably reviewed. Here are a few comments:       Comments: The author establishes a strong voice in these poems, so much so that it’s clear when a poem is in the voice of a character, like “Love: Lost and … Continue reading →

Message!

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To my friends, click to create your own 35 CommentsChronological   Reverse   Threaded reply lunarechoes wrote on May 22, ’08 Congratulations to your son and his proud mother both! And have a wonderful time. reply tulipsinspring wrote on May 22, ’08 Congratulations and have a wonderful time!!!!! And a big congratulations to him as well. Hugs, hugs, hugs!!! reply sanssouciblogs wrote on May 22, ’08 Thanks, so much! reply sanssouciblogs wrote on May 22, ’08 As Sweetie would say, “MWAH!” reply hurricanekate wrote on May 22, ’08 that’s cool! you too Miss Sans! xo reply sanssouciblogs wrote on May 22, ’08 … Continue reading →

9/11. The World Trade Center Blogs: Index to Multimedia Series (updated)

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This series has been updated several times. It was originally posted in 2008. [9/13, 9/14, 9/15, 9/16* 9/18, 9/21, 9/22, 9/23]   The posts have audio and visual components. They are best viewed on a large screen with audio on.   *📌Lead-in: From Brooklyn to Lower Manhattan/A visual essay and a prelude a  visit to the area triggers memories   *📌Part 1: Windows on the World Video: Building the World Trade Center Introduction George Willig, the wire walker Memory: dining at Windows On The World   *📌Part 2: Audio Walking Tour: A thousand pictures from the sounds (Narrated by Paul … Continue reading →

307. Index Page: Blogging For Breast Cancer

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The series was originally posted in 2007, and has been expanded. I run it annually. Please invite all your friends to read my story. Awareness is very important. If I can help one person I will be very happy. 10/1~ 63. Part 1. Spinning at 45 rpm’s: Wake Up Little Susie My journey starts here, as a child, visiting Brighton Beach, Brooklyn, NY 10/2~ 64. Part 2. Spinning at 45 rpm’s: Bye, Bye Love The summer of 1959, the ride is beginning. 10/3~ 65. Part 3. Spinning at 45 rpm’s: Beyond The Sea Revelation in a bathhouse. 10/4~ 66. Part … Continue reading →