208: Poetry: New Series: Couples: 1. Tanglewood
This is the beginning of a series called “Couples,” a topic that intrigues me, based on observations.
1. Tanglewood,
one evening in July, 2006****
© 7/02
He had that Hollywood look;
the tan, the lined, outdoor face that said, “maybe I’m an actor.”
In fact, he reminded me of Patrick Swayze, in Dirty Dancing;
He wore a tight tee shirt
that was slightly faded in color, like army drabs,
but on closer inspection I could see
that there was a pattern of swirls of blues and greens and mottled browns,
like marble.
He bent his dark and silver head of tousled-hair toward the woman
with the medium length blond, wavy hair.
She was youthful, slim, toned.
His wife. Or his lover.
Maybe in her 50’s.
She could have been his “Frances ‘Baby’ Houseman”1 years
after they met in the Catskills
and he transformed her innocence
by teaching her the dance moves;
lifted her over his head so she could soar,
arms extended
after she ran
and leaped into his waiting arms.
But now
that image sat tamed, 5 rows ahead of me at Tanglewood2,
(a far cry from the New York State hotels in the Catskills3
where the children of Jewish, Irish, Italian and German immigrants
fled to forget the oppressive city heat)
the night that Seiji Okawa conducted Mahler.
She couldn’t see, so she moved several seats over and
claimed an empty place at the end of the row
to better inhale the baton, the breeze,
the notes.
Their separation was like a
smiling mouth with missing teeth.
Almost shocking after having been so close,
they were apart with seats gaping empty between them yet
they were still connected by music.
After the passion of each movement ebbed and flowed
and washed over them, she moved back to his side and sat
but then stood and clapped,
and clapped, with her tanned hands and toned arms, and clapped.
Then sat, next to him, through the third round of bows.
I could see their heads move together,
they exchanged a word
as the stage light illuminated their hair
like halos,
then pulled apart to make room
for her left hand,
the back of which
gently ran
up and down
his cheek.
- a character in the movie, “Dirty Dancing;” a young woman who fell for Patrick Swaze’s character—he taught her the dance moves
- Tanglewood-place in Massachusetts where summer concerts are held
- The Catskill Mountains was where “Dirty Dancing” took place. It is a resort area of hotels that are active in the summer and were very popular in the 40’s -70’s
Tanglewood music festival: inside concert hall, or enjoy the music from the lawn. The grounds are huge, beautiful and lush, but once in the parking lot with millions of cars, one never escapes–at least not for an hour.
Lenox, Massachusetts.
Gustav Mahler from symphony no. 2 The Resurrection
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From the parallel universe of Yahoo
Wonderful poem….your talent always amazes me! I have been to Tanglewood. A lovely place…..sitting on the lawn and taking in the music under the summer night sky. Priceless!!! Thank you for always transporting me to another time and place.
Tuesday April 15, 2008 – 12:58pm (EDT)
I’m a people watcher too LOL. I could sit for hours in Books-A-Million and just think up stories of the people coming and going. Though you do it in better detail than I, I really like to think they can’t be too different than I.
Love the details! Love how you describe their hair and what YOU see when you look at someone. We get a glimpse of your mind when you do that. We get to see what makes you tick by the details you point out.
Beautifully done!
Tuesday April 15, 2008 – 02:32pm (CDT)
Great images. I used to go to Tanglewood concerts all the time when I lived in DC. I could again feel the cooling summer night and smell the fresh grass (that we were sitting on and I am afraid also smoking).
Tuesday April 15, 2008 – 06:40pm (MDT)
most couples complete each other or contrast otherwise, or are neutral, togeyjer they teem up against all odds, and so thoughfully you have constructed a poetic theme to work on it, the blog is so romantic, adding a new variant streak to the image i had built of you in my mind–thanx for the share
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i liked this poetry, somehow i think we had a little same wave length if you care to go for my review for this week, some where there is a connection in mind? http://shankarg.multiply.com/reviews/item/5
i did a review of “roman holiday” and whether it had connection with your poem or not, it does on couples and the feelings your poem oh me it is well still searching the correct word in thesaurus and dictionary! |
starfishred wrote on Apr 15, ’08, edited on Apr 15, ’08
very nice -couples are very very interesting to observe-without a word body language can say so much
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lauritasita wrote on Apr 15, ’08
I liked this. It was also fun to be able to listen to your voice while I read it. Interesting observation.
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bostonsdandd wrote on Apr 15, ’08
I’m a people watcher too LOL. I could sit for hours in Books-A-Million and just think up stories of the people coming and going. Though you do it in better detail than I, I really like to think they can’t be too different than I.
Love the details! Love how you describe their hair and what YOU see when you look at someone. We get a glimpse of your mind when you do that. We get to see what makes you tick by the details you point out. Beautifully done! |
danceinsilence wrote on Apr 15, ’08
I really enjoyed this one … the watching, and the assumptions we make of what and who they could be or do for a living just based on their mannerisms.
This just sang out at me … (a far cry from the New York State hotels in the Catskills3 where the children of Jewish, Irish, Italian and German immigrants fled to forget the oppressive city heat) Well done! http://danceinsilence.multiply.com/journal/item/250/Poetry_Wednesday_…_First_Date |
It’s such a good description that I have had the illusion that I was there on person watching that couple!!!
http://belita747.multiply.com/journal/item/418/POETRY_WEDNESDAY_-_HAIKU |
sweetpotatoqueen wrote on Apr 15, ’08
The dynamics between couples can be full of specultion and curiosity to the observer. I was right there with you as you watched this couple at the concert. I can only imagine that the presence of Mahler’s music made the mingling of motions by this coule even more dramatic. Eagerly awaiting more on this series dear poetess!
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millimusings wrote on Apr 15, ’08
Very lovely observation on your part and wonderfully written too. Ah I was actually there viewing it with you and I could even hear the clapping. Thanks Sue.
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jayaramanms wrote on Apr 15, ’08
A class Poem with beautiful description with Sui’s Stamp. Thanks for sharing. Mine is at –http://jayaramanms.multiply.com/journal/item/128/POETRY_WEDNES_DAY. Thank you.
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sanssouciblogs wrote on Apr 15, ’08
ged1965 said
precision pointalism,can you ride a tandem? Hey, Ged, how are you? thanks for coming.
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sanssouciblogs wrote on Apr 15, ’08
mntsinger said
Wonderful poem and so descriptive 🙂 Hiya, Diana, good to see you!
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greenwytch wrote on Apr 16, ’08
gorgeous…..i felt i was there watching them.
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skeezicks1957 wrote on Apr 16, ’08
I can just see them for myself as your words describe them. Excellent writing.
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philsgal7759 wrote on Apr 16, ’08, edited on Apr 16, ’08
TANGLEWOOD is awesome isn’t it I used to live near there. As always your imagery is amazing. Please let me know when and where your recently published poetry is available
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sanssouciblogs wrote on Apr 16, ’08
philsgal7759 said
TANGLEWOOD is awesome isn’t it I used to live near there. As always your imagery is amazing. Please let me know when and where your recently published poetry is available Nothing is published yet, Narice, I am working on getting it all together to submit and hope to do my own art work. Hit a wall, as many of my poems (Cerebral Jukebox) are linked to music, I now need to search for copyright owners and submit permission requests. Nice. How do I get in touch with Alicia Keys? Yesterday I wrote to Motown…
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I’ve never been to any of the places, but I have seen the movie many times. Love the romance ignition at the beginning and the swirl of gentle fire at the end of your poem! Your character is so detailed, I have no problem picturing the scene.
Thank you also for stopping in at my blog and commenting so kindly. I’m doing my rounds late this week, but was so surprised and delighted to find so many kind comments. The writing and the kind words from so many have helped me a great deal this week. Thanks again, janeen |
tulipsinspring wrote on Apr 20, ’08
I absolutely adore you!!!! Sue this is so wonderful — on so many levels that I don’t even know where to begin. The detail, again, is incredible, and conjures up such a clear mental image. The comparison to Dirty Dancing, which brought another mental image to mind. I loved this line: “Their separation was like a smiling mouth with missing teeth.” When you followed that by your description of the missing seats, it was completely perfect! I’m amazed, not just by your eye for detail, but by your uncanny ability to describe it in just a way that makes me see it. I have never been to Tanglewood, but I just went there for a few minutes thanks to you.
I’m sorry it took me so long to get here. But I love your poetry so much that I try to find a time where I can read it at my leisure and really properly enjoy it. And you never fail to amaze me. I’m so proud to know such a talented writer. I wonder if you know how truly gifted you are. Thanks for this, and looking forward to the rest of your series. Hugssssssssssss! |
meerkatz007 wrote on Apr 29, ’08
Ha! Now I’m thinking of couples I know … and how every life is worth a song.
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